Small Poem based on the Movie (CONTAINS SPOILERS)

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Devianteist

MemberMothra LarvaeMay 19, 20142637 Views8 Replies

Collapsed in a heap
These rewards they will reap
Upon its corpse, buried deep
A God has fallen and they creep

Fire rains on their dawn
As Man decimates their spawn
Fury boils down on the pawn
A furious roar within a fawn

Power much untold
Bodies break and fold
The God rises, eyes burning gold
Earth shattering, he would behold

Winds beat furiously
The God fought, mercilessly
He fought, meaninglessly
Death came, senselessly

She chased, mournful
She roared, scornful
Pain rent her, hurtful
The God pursued her, dreadful

It wished to give her a kiss goodbye
A kiss that would make her cry
Take away the pain than dampens her eye
Godzilla breathed the kiss that would make her di

She= 8-Legged Female Muto
He= Winged Male Muto
It/God= Godzilla

Poem being read on Youtube.

Deviation is not shameful. Conforming is.

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Lewshizz
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LewshizzMay 19, 2014

That was really beautiful man... *claps*

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Kage432May 19, 2014

Nice one!

#NEWBLOOKEDATMYSHIKAI http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/077/0/9/Aizen_Motivational_by_draconichero18.jpg

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Kage432May 19, 2014

Awakened is he, disturbed once more

Tasked with ending man's doing at it's core

No longer hunted by the mechanisms of man

The God of destruction has come to undo the matter at hand

No bullet or shell or bomb could slow him

No army or weapon or monster can stop him

Death has come to reap us - our ignorance

God have mercy on the souls unfortunate enough to survive this experience

For years man has fooled with nature, tis could be considered a trait

But like all else, oblivion will in time come to those who wait

#NEWBLOOKEDATMYSHIKAI http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/077/0/9/Aizen_Motivational_by_draconichero18.jpg

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High FLYERS Tag TeamMay 19, 2014

My brother was nice enough to turn your poem into a vid

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fdSxg_1PMWg

There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

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Something RealMay 20, 2014

DEVIANTEIST and KAGE432 - Those were very nice! I very much enjoyed the creativity and adherence to the source material you both utilized. Thank you very much for sharing these with us! :)

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DevianteistMay 20, 2014

It seems this has gotten a bit more recognition than I had intended!

@LewShizz- Why thank you! :)

@Kage432- You've got a nice one there too my friend.

@High Flyers Tag Team- Now that is very nice! I am flattered.

@Something Real- On behalf of us both I say thank you. On my own behalf, you're welcome. Source material is a beautiful thing when utilized correctly, and I will never shame it once I see it.

Deviation is not shameful. Conforming is.

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High FLYERS Tag TeamMay 20, 2014

DEVIANTEIST- Your welcome. Me and my bother loved the poem. Also sorry for it cutting off before the last sentence ended. It must of glitch

There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

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godzilla96May 20, 2014

love the poem

G96

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