I Have 11 Chapters of My Godzilla Story Done... Feedback?

This is a sort of sequel to Godzilla 2000 (although I have re-written some things to make it better fit this universe) It is a cast of new characters with re-imaginings of Hedorah, Biollante and MechaGodzilla :) I decided to do a character centric story, but I won't hide Godzilla or anything. I just want some feedback (specifically if the story is decent right now)

Godzilla 2020