Sneak peek at a upcoming story

This is a sneak peek of a upcomming story of mine that I might turn into a fan film

At 2:54 a.m Seth hears sirens. "Dad! You hear that?" "Hear what?" Dillion said. "Uhh Seth we need to get out now." They ran downstairs and everyone was running out. They started running. "Run Seth" when Dillion trip and got trample. Seth stopped. "Run Seth!" Seth started crying but started running. He got outside and he turn around and didn't see his dad. Then he saw spikes rising up above the the hotel. He froze. The spikes got higher. Then he saw a eyeball. He fell down and started crawling. Then he turn to look back. When he did he saw a creature standing there by the hotel. The Creature gave a roar then walked threw the hotel.

did you guys enjoy. remember this is only a sneak peek