
joaomlo2
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-05-2014 4:02 PMSo, as inspiration kept striking me even after I finished my frist script, I decided to immediatly start writing another one. I don't have a fixed idea for the plot, but so far, all I can say is that it will revolve aroud the USA creating a monster to be their first line of defense against the MUTO's and/or Godzilla, but as expected, thing get out of hand and the monster escapes, leading to Godzilla's reappearance. I will take things slower and more detailed with more character development than the first script, but I guarantee that I intend to keep Godzilla a badass when the big fight begins.
UN Headquarters
Manhattan, USA
24 hours after Operation Kingsguard
-So, Dr.Serizawa, you must understand our concerns here. Although we are seriously relieved by the success of this operation, the fact that the Cretorian army is starting to discover that MIST operated on their soil, has made the our relationship with them even worse, but that is not why we are apreensive about Monarchs performance. The fact that your so called security protocols allowed a terrorist to infiltrate your headquarters and steal an Anti-Matter bomb prototype would be a reason strong enough to shut you down, but since you are our last line of defense against the MUTO's, all we can do is to trust you to deal (and let's hope it doesn't get to that) with more professionalism on the next situation.
-I understand, but I must warn you that although our job is to protect our society, we were not expecting that Cretoria would hide the spore from us.
-But they did. You are acting naive Serizawa. You, more than anyone on this room would know that there are always those who give up to the temptation of power. And then, there is Talaghan. What were you thinking on killing the leader? He could have gave us the names of their sleeper agents.
-It was not my call, besides, do you think a man like that would spit out the names of his comrades?
-Ok. You have a point. But what we want to say with all this is that since Godzilla and the MUTO's became known to public, something started. I personally can almost guarantee that the Talaghan are just the tip of the Iceberg. Soon, bigger organizations like the Al-Quaeda will put their eyes on you, and once they do, they will be dropping bombs in there like if it was the 4th of July.
-Our people already have their files completely checked.
-And how do you know that the people who check are not terrorists?
-Enough, Mr.President of the USA!-says Serizawa, shocking everyone in the room-We are as transparent as we can be, but it seems to you that we are hiding something. Is it because our team is not maioritary american?
-I never said that, Director Serizawa. But I can say that we could send our troops to Cretoria and we could have dealt with the Talaghan threat and come back home to dinner.
Serizawa laughs.
-Sure. You could deal with the Talaghan. And what would the Cretorian army do? Watch while the americans invade their already crumbling country and applaud? As far as I know, you would let the MUTO destroy Cretoria if he stayed away from the gas pipelines.
-You little asian...
-Enough, Mr.President!-says the secretary-general-Your country is suspended from the UN.
-No we are not, because I declare that the US will not continue more on this circus. If we need to deal with further threats, we will have our means. We won't need those amateurs from Monarch. And every american worker, if they are true patriots they will get out of there.
-They do not belong to you anymore Mr.President.
-Then they must decide between citizenship or exile. Excuse me.-says the USA president
-What a fine mess you got in here Dr.Serizawa.-says the Russia representant-We just lost one great supporter.
-I understand my actions and acknowledge further consequences, but I admit that I let my personnal judgment surpass my professionalism.
-We noticed that. That is why we are sorry, but right now we only have 2 options, and since we need Monarch fully functional, what is left is your resignation. That way, the american president may reconsider exiting the UN.
-I accept those terms and propose Dr.Graham to replace me at the head of Monarch.
-We can't see why not.-says the secretary-general- Thereby this council agrees to replace Monarch's Director Ichiro Serizawa by one of his choice.
-Thank you. And let me say one more time that I am deeply sorry for creating this mess. Best of luck in getting America back.
Aspen
Colorado,USA
1 day after the council
It is night on the town and although it is cold, snow does not fall. Ford is distracted from the sight on the window by the noisy telephone.
-The phone is ringing.-says Sam Brody
-I will pick it up-says Ford while going in the phone's direction-Hello?
-Mr.Brody?-says a voice
-Who is this? Hello?
But the caller hangs up.
-What the hell?
Ford looks through the window and sees a black van stopping on the street.
-Dad, your cellphone.-says Sam handing him the phone
Ford takes it while he sees men exiting the van with coats saying FBI.
-Mr.Brody?
-Takashi? What is going on?
One of the men points to Ford's house.
-They are coming for you. Grab your family quick and head east to the end of the block.
-What the hell?
-Honey, what is going on?-says Elle
-We have to leave now.
-What?
The bell rings and Sam is about to answer.
-Wait! Do not answer. Honey, you and Sam need to follow me and be quiet!
-Ford, you are scaring me.
-Hurry, through the back door.
-Lieutenant Brody, FBI. We know you are here. Open the door now!-says a voice from outside.
Ford, Elle and Sam exit through the back door and sneak through the backyard, but one of the FBI agents appears right in front of him and immediatly pulls a gun on them scaring Elle and Sam.
-Nice try. This is Carson, the suspect...
He could not finish as Ford disarms him and punches him in the face, knocking him out. He proceeds to grab the gun.
-What is happening!? Why is the FBI after us?
-I don't know. Come on, we need to move.
They go through the darkness and behind them, the FBI briefly assist their fellow agent, but start pursuing them. The family runs to the end of the alley and a black van stops in front of them.
-Goddamit.-says Ford
The window lowers and reveals Takashi driving the vehicle.
-Get in, now!
Elle and Sam sit on the back and Ford goes on the passenger seat. Takashi then proceeds to drive away in full speed.
-Why the hell is the FBI after us?
-Don't you see the news? The president decided to abandon the UN, and mostly because of Monarch. They are after us because we work there.They want to know what we know about Monarch. And specially, they want to know what you know about the Anti-Matter bomb.
-Jesus. Where are you taking us?
-To the local airfield. A plane is waiting for is there.
-Won't they know of it with the radar?
-That's the good part. Remember when we could not find the first two MUTOs with radars?
-Yes.
-Our engineers compared the bodies of the last MUTO with the first two ones and found an organ that would emmit a special electro-magnetic wave that caused the radars to go blind on him. From there, they easily adapted it to a special technology that we call EMC or Electro-Magnetic Cloak.
-Nice.
-Is this your colleague?-asks Elle.
-Yes. Sorry for not introducing myself before. I am Lieutenant Margareth Takashi. I am your husband's team leader.
-Elle Brody. Nice to meet you.
-And I am Sam Brody.
-Nice to meet you Sam. Your father spoke much about you.
-What are we going to do now Ford? I don't know if you realize, but we just threw our new lives out of the window.
-What do you say to work in Monarch?
-I am just a nurse.
-Director Graham is offering a job that will fit you just right. You already have a safe house near our headquarters.Ok, here we are.
They arrive at an semingly abandoned airfield with an aircraft carrier waiting on the tracks. Takashi drives into the plane and the door closes just as the plane starts taking off.
-Ok. You can exit the car while I make a call to the HQ.-says Takashi.
They exit and Takashi takes the phone from her pocket.
-This is Ice Queen. Lieutenant Brody and his family are with us. We are heading back to the HQ.
-Cool nickname. Ice Queen.-says Sam to Ford- What is yours dad?
Ford looks at Sam and smiles. Takashi overhears and smiles as well.
-I don't have a nickname. It is just Lieutenant Brody.
-But you should get one.
-Do you want to know the nicknames of my other teammates?
-Yes please!
-So, we have Heartbeat, Hammer and Goodnight.
-Those names are cool. Am I going to meet them?
-I don't know.
Sam's smile starts to fade away
-We are not going back home right?
-I am afraid not. But our new house will be great.-says Ford while he looks at a concerned Elle-I promise.
That will be it for now. Like in my first script, I would like you to make suggestions. Right now, I would like you to suggest:
-The name of the monster (and description if possible)
-The name of the Department where Elle will be working in Monarch.(Is it good idea to put her working with the ones that study the MUTOs?)
-Some cool gadgets/weapons developed by Monarch enginneers.
-As the only Godzilla movies I saw where Gojira, GINO and 2014, and thereby my Godzilla knowledge is quite limited, I would like you to suggest possible Godzilla's moves/powers that you like most.

kaijudinosaurfan12345
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-05-2014 6:40 PMmaybe you could biollante as a weapon the us stole from monarch
ellle could work in the hospital there
the monarch enginneers could have made an exo-suit called jet jaguar incase they are attacked again

kaijudinosaurfan12345
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-05-2014 6:47 PMgodzilla could have a nuclear pulse after he absorbed too much radiation
or maybe orga as a genectic experiment that has godzilla cells and muto cells and other monsters cells.
anguirius could show up with rodan awakened by USA interfering found in america and maybe other monsters would show up in different countries trying to harness the power of the monster.shimoura could show up from the graphic novel.
also at the tail end you should have serizawa finding echolocation similar to godzillas in an abondoned part of the world

Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusJun-06-2014 7:41 AMKING GHIDORAH!!!!Please put King Ghidrah even Biollante as another monsters but King Ghidorah
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