
King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-25-2014 3:50 PMFord Brody- “It has been three years since the first monster attack. Back then we were unprepared for what was coming, but luckily we a certain God saved us. We thought such a catastrophe would never be experienced again, however we still prepared because of our fear but that was not enough. Now we all know that only one can truly protect us from what would wipe us out. But he was secretive and soon humanity started to become arrogant once more and try to control him. I thought my fight was over but now I know it had just begun...
Hawaii – 7/8/2017. 12:42pm
The sirens started blaring and soon everyone was running and screaming away from the shores. Thousands of birds flew ahead of them, retreating from the same threat. Soldiers across the giant wall to protect the city jumped into helicopters and flew towards the sea. People pushed and even stealed eachothers cars to frantically escape and some just sat in there home's trying to hide from the inevitable the squarks of the birds silenced and the peoplebecame even more frantic as gunshots and explosions could be heard, but suddenly it all stopped and people slowly began to turn around a large earthquake formed in front of them and people, cars and homes were swalloed into a gapping hole, some continued to run, others curiosity took the better of them and they began to walk towards the hole in the ground. A earpiercing screech made the ears of those close to the hole bleed and a collosal centipede monster arose from the hole. with eight legs on either side of its body and a shell protecting its soft flesh the insect began to burrow into the skyscrapers killing hundreds. but the kaiju's sences kicked in and it turned its head towards the sea, as a fammiliar God came into view
SHREOOOOOONK!
Hope you enjoyed this so far. Its the first ever book I have had a go at so I guess you can spot some mistakes here and there, but hey it will all work in time.

Moses
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-25-2014 5:56 PMAlthough I would've liked the attack to happen in a different location, your story seems to be very good.
8/10.
"I fear all we have done is to awaken a sleeping giant and fill him with a terrible resolve."

King Of The Monsters
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-26-2014 2:25 AMGODZILLASAURUS REX- Do you have any Idea's on were the location can take place? I went for hawaii because of the concept art of the dead centipeade but thanks for the rating so far.

Moses
MemberMothra LarvaeMay-26-2014 9:07 AMAh, I can definetley understand that.
Eitherway, I'm excited to see what lies in chapter 3.
"I fear all we have done is to awaken a sleeping giant and fill him with a terrible resolve."
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