the beginning of my godzilla movie,Godzilla The Monsters Battle(script)PLEASE READ AND TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE THIS!!!!!

so the movie starts like this: everyting is black ,the screen is black.you hear in the backround the evacuation alarm that makes people leave.the screen is still black. then for 10 seconds you see the destruction. the main character's girlfriend helen is running w/ other people evacuating. the buildings are falling debris is falling. people is screaming, you hear the evac alarm stop and something crash and you hear a loud thud. Helen looks to the right and see's a giant scorpian upside down as if it got thrown. it was so huge that it was a size of the 3rd biggest building on earth. so you could clearly see the scorpian. helen keeps running until they see a helicopter fell and crash right on front of you. at lease 30 feet away. the you see a giant creature. looks like a giant lizard.w/ spikes on its back. its godzilla.Godzilla was so huge he was the size of the biggest building in the world!he was almost reaching the clouds!so the helicopter looked like a tiny fly to godzilla! you see godzilla walking toward the giant scorpian until another huge monster came... it was the alien that landed from space...Malian. it tackled godzilla down and made so much destruction.but as malian tackled the king of monsters,spikes came out of the floor and make a giant earthquake(Malian is a orga/spacegodzilla like creature) then when godzilla fell all this smoke came out of nowhere comeng at people including at helen at 300 miles per hour.not only that.as godzilla stands up,his tail is sweeping the dust which make the parts of builing go w/ smoke. then helen has an option... stand there and die....or run and try to survive... then the screen goes black again and it showes the title. then 3 days earlier...ahope u enjoyed